We do a lot with our eyes in our writing. We roll them around rooms and sometimes they flit from place to place. While that seems normal, we need to avoid the Floating Body Parts (FBP) syndrome. Here are some excellent thoughts on how to do that.
I’m seeing a lot of “eyes” these days in the works I’ve been editing. Understandable, since they’re both for vision and for expression. Problem is, we rely on the use …
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